Smart Relationships (with Monique, Kalisi and Aurora

The Last slide is mine and I hope you like qualities of a smart relationship.

Adding detail to our writing

This is what we have to put into our writing to add more detail.

Adding more detail make your writing more interesting.

Making your writing more interesting makes people want to read it.

Screenshot this image if you want to put detail in your writing. 

My Holiday at (At The Zoo)

In the Holidays we went to the Auckland Zoo. It was a sunny Saturday morning, we were celebrating my cousins 2nd birthday.
I went with my cousin Delylah, my soon to be cousin Millen, my Aunty Hollie, my Uncle Matty, my Mum, my brothers dad and my 3 siblings.

The first animals we looked at were the Giraffes, Zebra's and the Ostrich's. Then we looked at the meerkats, they are pretty cute (sometimes). But the cutest animal was the Cotton top Tamarin's. We watched them play for a while.

After walking around more and seeing other
animals we stopped at the playground for a play and had some food that we brought with us. There were sausage rolls, nuts, fruit and sparkling water.

Overall my favorite thing was when I climbed
on top of the dragon at the playground. I thought I would  fall but I tried to be very careful and held onto the spikes.


We followed our maps around for a while to
see the rest of the animals we had missed.
On our way back to the gate, we got to see the new tiger enclosure that they are building and    my family and I cant wait to come back when    it is finished.

Everyone enjoyed their day but after the 2 and a half hours we spent there we were ready to go home. We said our goodbyes to my Aunty Hollie, cousin DD, Millen and Uncle Matty.
On our way home Mum bought us an ice block each and something hot to eat.

To end such an awesome day we went for a rest because we went for a big walk.                                                       

My Learning About Adjectives